Converge – Jane Doe tab

okay so i pretty much made a hybrid of James Bailey's tab, the guitar pro version, and 
a live video from youtube.

Please comment and tell me how you like this version. I think the ending riff is better 
the ones on this site atm.

btw this is my first tab on here.

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| /  slide up
| \  slide down
| h  hammer-on
| p  pull-off
| ~  vibrato
| +  harmonic
| .  Mute note
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D :-----------------|------------------|--------------------|A :-----------------|------------------|--------------------|F :--------6------\-|------6-----------|-----6-----7--------|C :0----------------|0-------------5---|0-------------------|G :0----/5----------|0--/5-------------|0-/5---5/6----------|C :0----------------|0---------3h4-----|0-------------------|
D :-------------------|----------------|----------------------------|A :-------------------|----------------|----------------------------|F :-------------------|--------8-------|-----------------3-3-3-3-3-3|C :--12-----7b--------|5-------8-x4----|5---0-0-0-0-0-0--2-2-2-2-2-2|G :-------------------|5-x13---6-------|5---0-0-0-0-0-0--1-1-1-1-1-1|C :8----8\4-----------|5---------------|5---0-0-0-0-0-0-------------| |figure out strum| . . . . . . pattern
D :--------------------------|--------------------|---------------------|A :--------------------------|--------------------|---------------------|F :------7--7----------8--7--|---------8--3-------|---3-3-3----3-3-3----|C :0--0--7--7--0--3--5-7--7--|0--3--5--7--3-------|2--2-2-2-2--2-2-2----|G :0--0--5--5--0--3--5-6--5--|0--3--5--6--1-------|2--1-1-1-2--1-1-1----|C :0--0--------0--3--5-------|0--3--5-------------|2--------2-----------|
. . . d u d u d u d uD :----------------|A :----------------|F :----------------|C :2/3-------------|G :2/3-------------|C :2/3-------------|
D :----------------|----------------|---------6----|--------|A :----------------|----------------|---------6----|--------|F :----------------|-----8---3------|---------8-x6-|--------|C :2/3-3-3/5-------|-5---8---3---3--|-0-------8----|-0--0-0-|G :2/3-3-3/5-------|-5---6---1---3--|-0-------6----|-0--0-0-|C :2/3-3-3/5-------|-5-----------3--|-0------------|-0--0-0-| |___________| . . . figure strum ptrn
ending @ approx 6:30
D :---------------------|A :---------------------|F :---------8-8-8-8-8-8-|C :-0-------7-7-7-7-7-7-| repeat, slowing down each timeG :-0-------6-6-6-6-6-6-| until you get to the epicness..C :-0-------------------|
D :-------------------------|-------------------------------------|A :-------------------------|------------3-------------6p3-3------|F :-----7-7---------7-7-----|----------3---3------2p0------5b-----|C :---------0-----------0---|--------0-------0--------------------|G :--8-------8---8----------|-------------------------------------|C :8-----------8------------|-8\4--4-----------4------------------|
D :--------------------|----------------------------|------------------|A :--------3-----------|----------------------------|------------------|F :r5-p3-3-3-3-3-3-----|-----------<5>--------------|------------------|C :----------7-3-3h5-0-|-----0---x-<5>-x------------|5-5-5-5-5-5-------|G :------------------0-|-----0---x-----x-<5>--------|5-5-5-5-5-5-x2----|C :------------------0-|--2b-0---x-----x-<5>--------|5-5-5-5-5-5-------|
+ + harmonicsD :------------------|A :------------------|F :------------------|C :1-1-1-1-1-1-------|G :1-1-1-1-1-1-x2----|C :1-1-1-1-1-1-------|
*updated thurs sept 11 08. -added new parts and updated certain sections for more accurate sound
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