Tim Buckley – Song To The Siren tab

I first heard this song on youtube, from a clip on the Monkees TV show. I wanted to 
it but I couldn't find a decent enough tab, so I did it myself. This is my first tab, so I 
apriciate some feed back and possibly some of the picking patterns.
Email me at gazzaday@aol.com if you have any suggestions about this tab.
Thanks

Capo 2nd Fret, Standard Tuning

C(9):e-0-  G/B:e-0-     B-3-      B-3-     G-0-      G-0-     D-0-      D-0-     A-3-      A-2-     E-x-      E-x-

Intro

e|3---2-----2-----3---2-----2-----3---2-----2-----2|B|--3---3-----3-----3---3-----3-----3---3-----3---3|G|--------2-----2---------0-----0---------0-----0-2|D|0---0-------------------------------------------0|A|----------------3---3-----------2---2------------|E|-------------------------------------------------|

-Verse

D              A
Long afloat on shipless oceans
G            Bm
I did all my best to smile
D                 A
'Til your singing eyes and fingers
G              Bm
Drew me loving to your isle

-Chorus

D            C(9)
And you sang sail to me
G/B               D
Sail to me let me unfold you
Bm                   A          G
Here I am, here I am waiting to hold you